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Foxpaw*
Journey
Aug 19 2008, 10:45 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 19 2008, 10:45 AM EDT
(Nobody answer except me and Bouncestep)

*Foxclaw pads in front of Smokefur into the daek, unknown forest on the search for their mother, Ruby* Let's hunt Smokefur! I'm starving!
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Bouncestep
1. RE: Journey
Aug 20 2008, 7:21 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 20 2008, 7:21 PM EDT
Oh youre always hungrey! but we can*he padded off* Do you find this valuable?    

Foxpaw*
2. RE: Journey
Aug 21 2008, 10:25 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 21 2008, 10:25 AM EDT
*Foxclaw catches a squirrel and crouches down to eat it* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
3. RE: Journey
Aug 21 2008, 2:48 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 21 2008, 2:48 PM EDT
"*Foxclaw catches a squirrel and crouches down to eat it*"
*smokefur layed down next to him eating a black bird*hurry up we have a long way to go.
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Foxpaw*
4. RE: Journey
Aug 22 2008, 11:53 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 22 2008, 11:53 AM EDT
*gulps down the last bite of the squirrel and stands up and squints into the distance* I see a barn over there! Let's look for Ruby there! *swishes his tail* Lets go! Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
5. RE: Journey
Aug 22 2008, 7:53 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 22 2008, 7:53 PM EDT
"*gulps down the last bite of the squirrel and stands up and squints into the distance* I see a barn over there! Let's look for Ruby there! *swishes his tail* Lets go!"
*he raced toward it*
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Foxpaw*
6. RE: Journey
Aug 23 2008, 6:31 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2008, 6:31 PM EDT
*Foxclaw runs afer him, reaches the doorway before Smokefur and then gasped in horror when he saw two dogs sleeping inside* Smoke fur! Run!! *he steps on a twig and the noise woke the dogs who eyes the cats and got up, growling* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
7. RE: Journey
Aug 23 2008, 6:53 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2008, 6:53 PM EDT
"*Foxclaw runs afer him, reaches the doorway before Smokefur and then gasped in horror when he saw two dogs sleeping inside* Smoke fur! Run!! *he steps on a twig and the noise woke the dogs who eyes the cats and got up, growling*"
Im not leaving you!*heraced into the barn and faced the dogs. he whispered*run!*but the wind slammed the door shut.The two cats were trapped*
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Foxpaw*
8. RE: Journey
Aug 23 2008, 9:01 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 23 2008, 9:01 PM EDT
*the dogs lunged at the cats and Foxclaw leaped at the nearest one, slashing his face and neck, and the dog clamped onto this shoulder, and Foxclaw yelped in pain and bit the dogs neck. The dog ran away through a hole in the barn wall* Smokefur... *he gasped, he collasped and everything went black* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
9. RE: Journey
Aug 24 2008, 8:44 AM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2008, 8:44 AM EDT
"*the dogs lunged at the cats and Foxclaw leaped at the nearest one, slashing his face and neck, and the dog clamped onto this shoulder, and Foxclaw yelped in pain and bit the dogs neck. The dog ran away through a hole in the barn wall* Smokefur... *he gasped, he collasped and everything went black*"
*Smokefur helt the dog rip his ear and he sent the other one through the hole and limped over to his brother*are you okay?
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Foxpaw*
10. RE: Journey
Aug 24 2008, 3:07 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 24 2008, 3:07 PM EDT
*foxclaw grunted* yeah. *he tried to stand up but then crumpled to the ground and whimpered in pain* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
11. RE: Journey
Aug 28 2008, 12:41 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 28 2008, 12:41 PM EDT
"*foxclaw grunted* yeah. *he tried to stand up but then crumpled to the ground and whimpered in pain*"
Ruby~*she walked into the barn and stared at the two dirty beleding cats*Do you too need some help?

Smokefur~yeah.*he didnt look up from his brother*
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Foxpaw*
12. RE: Journey
Aug 28 2008, 3:40 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 28 2008, 3:40 PM EDT
*Foxclaw looks at his mother with disbelief* Mom?!?! *he squints his eyes as if he can't belive they found her* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
13. RE: Journey
Aug 28 2008, 3:46 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 28 2008, 3:46 PM EDT
"*Foxclaw looks at his mother with disbelief* Mom?!?! *he squints his eyes as if he can't belive they found her*"
Smokefur looked up*it is you!

Ruby~*her eyes glitterd as she touched noses with her sons.*tell me where have you been?

Smokefur~*he told her about the clans,his freinds and his family and everything untill his voice was sore from talking*
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Foxpaw*
14. RE: Journey
Aug 28 2008, 3:52 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 28 2008, 3:52 PM EDT
*foxclaw looks up at her and swishes his tail* Will you join ThunderClan? I'll teah you the warrior code! *looks up at Ruby hopefully* Do you find this valuable?    

Bouncestep
15. RE: Journey
Aug 28 2008, 3:54 PM EDT | Post edited: Aug 28 2008, 3:54 PM EDT
"*foxclaw looks up at her and swishes his tail* Will you join ThunderClan? I'll teah you the warrior code! *looks up at Ruby hopefully*"
Ruby~*purres*no it wouldnt suit me.you two sound like yu enjoy it.

Smokefur~*nudges his brother*we will stay here for a night then go home.

*the three cats curled up and went to sleep*
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Foxpaw*
16. RE: Journey
Sep 1 2008, 3:44 PM EDT | Post edited: Sep 1 2008, 3:44 PM EDT
*foxclaw sighs and goes to sleep* *next day they leave, foxclaw is hurt, and they go home* THE END Do you find this valuable?