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Feb 28 2008, 1:52 AM EST o my god! your story s so shitty it fucken sucks!!! (all offence!) mebe i wouldn't say this if i was not a very talented wrighter, but i am, so i will!!! it has absulutally no point or creativity and i am strongly suspicious that it had been copied off somthing, but anyway, u SUCK MIDNIGHT MOONS!!! U GREAT BULLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! 4 out of 16 found this valuable. Do you? |
 •Midnightmoons• |
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Apr 4 2008, 11:50 AM EDT Ya know....I wroght the Just when I series. So ha. Google it. And IM a blully? hmph 2 out of 2 found this valuable. Do you? |
 Leafheart22 |
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Apr 9 2008, 6:30 PM EDT Yeah... People shouldn't be so hateful like that. Have your opinions Anonymous, so what??? Midnight Moons, just as she said, she's a bully? Pish, Yeah right. Hateful she is not. Do you find this valuable? |
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•Midnightmoons• |
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Apr 10 2008, 8:27 PM EDT hehe.....yeah...right...lol 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Leafheart22 |
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Apr 10 2008, 9:12 PM EDT "hehe.....yeah...right...lol"Yep.... I hope they never come on this site again. If they don't like it, why even search it? hahahaha Do you find this valuable? |
 Mosskit |
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Apr 19 2008, 3:42 PM EDT wow some one has a ple up there @$$ Do you find this valuable? |
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Leafheart22 |
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Apr 19 2008, 6:58 PM EDT Who? The person way up at the top? It's cuz they're ignorant and hateful, if they didn;t like it, why did they even read it? And if you're talking about me, i am just saying, they shouldn't be so jerky because they didn't like a nice creation. Yeah, they and you can have your opinions if you're talkin to me. See ya Do you find this valuable? |
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Anonymous |
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May 3 2008, 12:13 PM EDT my god people who swear are pigs and ignorent i wish they go away don't you agree? Do you find this valuable? |
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Anonymous |
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May 6 2008, 10:18 AM EDT IM NOT THE GUY AT HE TOP BUT HE NEEDS HIS@$$ KICKED IF U ASK ME ILL BE GLAD TO DO IT 4 U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Anonymous |
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May 8 2008, 1:35 PM EDT you're right, i've read it before somewhere. THEY COPIED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Anonymous |
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May 8 2008, 1:37 PM EDT all of u, shut ur @$$h0lez!!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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ferntail ferntail |
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May 15 2008, 7:58 PM EDT omg omg omg midnightmoons is awesome i didn't read it because its bright colors with a dark background and that hurts my eyes but even if it wasn't good that doesn't make midnightmoons a bad person!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and watch the language u @$$hole!!!!! Do you find this valuable? |
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Mosskit |
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May 16 2008, 10:53 PM EDT just stop ok ur not all bad ass and stop thinking you are ok ur probably in 5 grade and a fuckin transvestite lesbian or gay ok so just shut up Do you find this valuable? |
 spottykit |
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May 17 2008, 1:06 PM EDT can ppl stop swearin plz Do you find this valuable? |
 wolfeye |
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May 17 2008, 1:10 PM EDT i agree with spottykit. anyone that swearz is just trying to be cool. Do you find this valuable? |
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BrokenAvenger BrokenAvenger |
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May 18 2008, 10:45 PM EDT lolz, the guy at da top says he is a talented writer! yeah right! he can't even spell half his words like a normal person! (Not to say that im a great speller) AND anyone who goes around insulting ppl's stories 4 the heck of it has mmmental problems! ;P Sooo what the f***, put a cork in it! Do you find this valuable? |
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wolfeye |
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May 18 2008, 10:51 PM EDT i agree. thats funny Do you find this valuable? |
 echotide |
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May 20 2008, 8:45 AM EDT hey mr. anon! if your so talented give us a sample of your work huh. I have 2 books published up here in kansas so let me critique your work! midnightmoons you have a nice story line but try seperating it more so you can see all the periods and quotations. If you do that you'll have one easy to read book that more people will like because it will look a little longer and appeal to those that like long books even though its only a short story at the moment. you may also want to make each chapter longer and better. spacing will take up more space which is exactly the thing stories need to grow. try spacing it kinda like this post but you dont have to if you dont want to. but get two sentences in there if they are short ones back to back to give it the longer feature Do you find this valuable? |
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wolfeye |
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May 20 2008, 1:09 PM EDT thats a good idea. i think you should try that midnightmoons. and to the anonamous give yourself a name then give us a story. we'll be the jugdes of who's is better. Do you find this valuable? |
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ferntail ferntail |
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May 20 2008, 5:15 PM EDT yeah give us an example of ur work!! Do you find this valuable? |
